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Really I was just going through your gallery in the hopes to find characters that YOU had made. All of your images are excellent, but a lot of them are paintings of pre-existing characters, not many to call your own. Though while I can see Marvel influences here, it's good to see that you've gone about making your own characters!
ANYWAY!! On to the C&C: Since your images are generally meant to give the idea of a 3D environment, take care when showing parts of anatomy from a completely profile perspective. In this piece in particular, the right leg of the "saluting" character to the left looks incredibly flat due to the lack of curve definition brought on by the perspective. It's still anatomically possible for his leg to bend that way, but avoid perfectly straight lines, tilt the leg alittle one way or another to aid curvature, and most importantly: define the curves in anatomy using shading.
You've improved a heckuva lot since this piece, but it never hurts to get some C&C.
i thank you so much for the time looking at my pieces and i really appreciate and accept the critic.
till now i still do mistakes though, im not perfect but trying is always a good thing for improvement.
you are always welcome to visit
reeeaally pro stuff man.
the madureira reference just pops to the sight and mind but there`s so much goin on.
congrats. excelent colors too.